When September ends

The darkness of the room envelopes me,

erasing my chances of being glee.
With Green Day playing in the background,
I say my thoughts aloud.
I think about the things I’ve done,
Whether or not I’ve been a good son.
The blaring of the TV fills the house,
making my radio seem as quiet as a mouse.
I rest my head on the pillow, 
waiting for the tears to fall.
I then hear a knock on my door,
so towards it, I slowly start to crawl.

“I told you to wake me up when September ends!”
I say to my intruder.
I rest my head onto the wall,
the coldness on my skin made me shudder.

The banging went louder,
the door handle shook.
Just when I was ready for my doom,
I heard my mother say:
“It’s already October! Clean your room!”

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Happy October everyone! 😀
Can I do humor or what? If you didn’t get it, then I failed 😛
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29 Replies to “When September ends”

  1. It's so well written. I like the ending too, it made me laugh. 🙂

  2. LOL!! Did you write that yourself? It's really good.

  3. Thank you for sharing. You did a good job. 🙂

  4. Well isn't that just like a mother? "It's already October! Clean your room!"

  5. LOL I love the way you write!!

  6. Great job! I wasn't expecting that ending!!

  7. This is cute! I can't make anything rhyme for the life of me. You are very clever!

  8. Ha! You did fantastic! Your rhyming was perfect too! And I kept hearing your words to a tune too.

  9. Lol. That was brilliant. Great poem 😀

  10. Great poem, love what you write

  11. I love the Green Day reference!

  12. I love how you write, the end cheered me up! Wonderful

  13. I can see this happening with my daughter. Cute poem!

  14. Lol…I didn't expect that great poem.

  15. I read the sign about September and loved that I wanted that month to end. Then I read your poem it is excellent. I really enjoyed it 🙂

  16. One day you'll be a famous author and I'll be able to say HEY I used to comment on her blog 🙂

  17. In my house I guess its October every day. Lovely poem.

  18. ROFL I love the ending. When I saw the title I thought of Green Day's song which is one of my favorite. 🙂

  19. Beautiful poem. Although I must say that I do love September so I want to be as awake as possible 🙂

  20. This poem made me laugh . Wake up , it's October 🙂

  21. Love this poem. September is always a great month for me……it is also my bday in Sept. !

  22. You are such a great writer. I had to chuckle at the end when you found out it was already October!

  23. What a cute little poem!

  24. I thought you really did a great job on this poem! Yeah, October is cleaning month 😀

  25. Hahahah adding the mother&#39;s line was a win-win! I love it!<br />PS: I love this song! 🙂

  26. LOL. Well September has ended and you better be wide awake! Love your poem,

  27. i love this 🙂 and happy october to you as well~

  28. This was great especially the ending

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