Just thrice

I’ve only seen her thrice.

When I first saw her,
With her nose in between a book,
She was snobbish and rude,
Her eyes stuck to boring pieces of paper.
Instead of interesting old me.
She once danced on stage,
Not as graceful as a swan,
but she was the only one who stood out,
out of all the little ducklings.
She held my hand once,
dragging me to the lab.
She pointed out the scribbles on the table
where I wrote with my name.
She huffed and puffed about being clean,
while I stood there, 
my eyes wandering to her lips,
how sweet it would be to close it with mine.
When she left to get a towel,
I stood there dumbfounded.
I’ve only seen her thrice,
but that was enough to fall in love.

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Although fiction, it has been inspired by someone’s status I saw preHaiyan. I just remembered about it now 🙂
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30 Replies to “Just thrice”

  1. Nice imagery. Well written, but then you always write so well!

  2. It's very pretty, and it evokes a lot of visuals.

  3. It's amazing how just seeing something for an instant can inspire such a lovely poem like this.

  4. Aw what a lovely poem – it's amazing how quickly you can fall in love. x

  5. So sweet, but with a tinge of sadness too. Beautiful!

  6. This is so lovely! When I write creative fiction, I am also usually inspired by encounters with real people. It's so fun to take one tiny thing, such as a Facebook status, and develop it into a beautiful piece of fiction. Thank you so much for putting yourself out there and sharing your work with all of us!

  7. Such a lovely poem! Simple, but very elegant.

  8. I am so happy to see you back and read your beautiful stories and poetry. I am also happy that after all you have been through, you still have such a positive attitude. Be well!

  9. What an interesting little read. I love fiction.

  10. I have never been great at poetry. Great to be inspired! Thanks for sharing

  11. That's a beautiful poem! Did you write it? You are very talented.

  12. Thrice, not a word you hear too often. It rolls off the tongue in an interesting way.

  13. wow beautiful poem you really painted a beautiful picture with your words

  14. What a wonderful poem! Thank you for sharing your writing with us.

  15. While it is fiction, it can happen that quickly. I hope he ends up with her though!

  16. I am always amazed how you can create something so beautiful from a FB update! True talent!!

  17. Nice to have you back Le-an. As usual your poems are interesting and intriguing.

  18. Such a strong connection. A very interesting way to fall in love with someone.

  19. What a sweet sentimental poem. Thank you for sharing.

  20. Very well written. It is amazing what inspires us! Thank you for sharing.

  21. How lovely thank you for sharing i look forward to seeing what you write next 🙂

  22. It's amazing how you can turn a bit of inspiration into a work of art!

  23. So very sweet. The emotion you show in your poems is just awesome!

  24. You really.set us up with the longing emotion you placed.here.

  25. You are very talented! I love this poem. Thanks for sharing!

  26. Nicely put! I never believed in love at first sight until I had my first child. 🙂

  27. Beautiful, I always admire those that can write poetry. 🙂

  28. Love. Another well written gem from a phenomenal author. I love reading your work. Keep it up.

  29. Ahh love this! You have such a wonderful way of writing!

  30. What a beautiful poem..you're such an amazing writer and I always enjoy reading your work..keep up the good job!

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